Discussion of what went well/what didn't go well in our rough music video

After putting together each part of our filming, into one big sequence, we watched it over and discussed as a group what we believe went well and what didn't go so well. At the beginning of the video, we edited the scene to the beat of the music, which we found extremely effective and found that it worked really well.
We all agreed that we need to work out the scene when Connor feels a hand on the back of his shoulder, the camera is not quite in focus and is slightly too close to Connor's face.
Throughout the video, we all contribute to the discussion and work out what needs more work to the video.